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Contest prize for Emute777 ~ by BeriBeri-Chuu Contest prize for Emute777 ~ by BeriBeri-Chuu
This is a contest prize for ~emute777
Sowwy it isn't scanned and sowwy it toke so long

Artwork (c) *BeriBeri-Chuu
Character (c) ~emute777
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:iconmiikichandesuu:
This is adorable <33

Well, indeed its very good in terms of anatomy, but:

1.- The hair is a bit to stiff, try giving it more movement and shading to it.
2.- Remark the eyebrows a bit more - it'll give a perfect detail for the drawing
3.- The shirt makes it look as if it was way to baggy, give it a more detailed figure to the waist.
4.- The hands, dear!

And not to say... have you tried doing different poses? It would be awesome seeing new poses for the amazing drawings you do!

I really hope its not harsh ; n ; <3 anyway thanks for reading <3
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emute777 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :heart: I really love it. It's so cute :hug:
THANK YOU :icondragonhug:
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Hehe I'm glad you like her :3
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emute777 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I's okay ^^
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PuriPop Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
cute!
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
Thanks puri :3
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Yoruny Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i just knew this was your drawing! i saw at the 'browse traditional media' thing~! xD
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Hehe :3 you know me so well
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Yoruny Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ufufu~! cuz it's as cute as ever~!! xD
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Hehe naww that's so sweet
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