Well firstly, this drawing is lovely and kawaii! ^w^ I love her design! c: Just to give you some good advice, for the lineart, it starts to get a bit faded to the bottom... make sure you continue to make it the same as the top. ^^ You could add a bit more shading as well, like make shadows of the stuff overlaping the other stuff... Also if you don't want to draw hands, you could put wrinkles into the sleeves and make them longer (I have trouble drawing hands to!) That is all now! 100 words now, I'll stop now!
Well I personally think the other critique was a bit harsh..? o v o I really like how you drew the hair! It's just so flowy~
The lines are dark, but the lineart should stay the same amount of darkness for the entire body though... and if you don't feel like drawing hands or are lazy (like me) just make the sleeves longer, do a chibi or put them behind her back? Or you can practise ;D I also can't give you too much for originality since I've seen that bow on characters for a while I do like the pom poms though, and this style is just adorable! * 3 * and add some shading. okay 100 words I'm out xD
Just to give you some good advice, for the lineart, it starts to get a bit faded to the bottom... make sure you continue to make it the same as the top. ^^
You could add a bit more shading as well, like make shadows of the stuff overlaping the other stuff...
Also if you don't want to draw hands, you could put wrinkles into the sleeves and make them longer (I have trouble drawing hands to!)
That is all now! 100 words now, I'll stop now!
I really like how you drew the hair! It's just so flowy~
The lines are dark, but the lineart should stay the same amount of darkness for the entire body though...
and if you don't feel like drawing hands or are lazy (like me) just make the sleeves longer, do a chibi or put them behind her back? Or you can practise ;D
I also can't give you too much for originality since I've seen that bow on characters for a while
and add some shading.
okay 100 words I'm out xD
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