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My new main oc :3 to be named  :3 do not ref by BeriBeri-Chuu My new main oc :3 to be named  :3 do not ref by BeriBeri-Chuu
This is my new main oc
I love her to pieces
Please don't ref for your own oc or nothing else
She needs a name comments are apprieciated

Art and character (c) :iconberiberi-chuu:
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Although this is is a cartoon character, it does not show the basic anatomical structure. The lines are crooked, hence NO high-end Finishing is there. Her right hand looks slightly Smaller than the Left one. Also the both hands are smaller as compared to the body.

Character- hair lines are crooked, that's a main con there. Head is perfectly formed and the facial structure is correct. The eyes plays a major role in expressing the Expression, and makes the character cute. There any many problems in the body. But looking that it's a comical childish character, it's not a big deal. you should be using more than one color also.

Overall- Overall this pic is cute, the lack of background is a bit let down though. Try to add more Quality to your further Drawings. Good Day
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Well I personally think the other critique was a bit harsh..? o v o
I really like how you drew the hair! It's just so flowy~ :meow:

The lines are dark, but the lineart should stay the same amount of darkness for the entire body though...
and if you don't feel like drawing hands or are lazy (like me) just make the sleeves longer, do a chibi or put them behind her back? Or you can practise ;D
I also can't give you too much for originality since I've seen that bow on characters for a while ^^; I do like the pom poms though, and this style is just adorable! * 3 *
and add some shading.
okay 100 words I'm out xD
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TeaTietoe Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ahwww so sche will be peach?:3
so cute > w <
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Hehe thanks :3 yup she will be peach if that's Okai?? And I'm going to scan her now so there will be a scanned version
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TeaTietoe Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
surree its overly ok ^0^
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
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outfit edit :3 tehe
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susu-milk Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Awww she is really cute Beri! > u < ♡
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Hhe thanks so much sumomo
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mochajelly Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
so cute!! i love her bows and pom poms *7* -freaks out and dies of cuteness attack-
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Thanks CHU :3nuuuu don't die!!!
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mochajelly Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
np~<3 ehehe, i revived =u=
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
You better have revived
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mochajelly Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
lol yus uvu
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Hehe :3
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Iciscle Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so cute-- I can't even ; v ;
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Lol :3 you can't even??
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Iciscle Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can't even ; v ;
like this- :iconcannotevenplz:
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Lol :3
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Iciscle Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconbrohugplz:
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Sugarlime-Chan Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Cutie piee
call her peachy xD
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Hehe thanks :3 and Okai :3 I might do
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sawarineko Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awww she looks really cute and adorable <3
i love your designs x3 :iconyousocuteplz:
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Hehe :3 thanks so muchu
Nawww thanks :3
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sawarineko Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem hun <3
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Hhe :3
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aisukurimu-tan Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awww she's such a cutie! :heart:
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Hehe thanks :3 I tried
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aisukurimu-tan Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome! And it paid off! xD :hug:
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Hehe I hope it did :3
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Honeybuun1018 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Artist
Cute :iconsoadorableplz:
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Thanks :3
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