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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Just to give you some good advice, for the lineart, it starts to get a bit faded to the bottom... make sure you continue to make it the same as the top. ^^
You could add a bit more shading as well, like make shadows of the stuff overlaping the other stuff...
Also if you don't want to draw hands, you could put wrinkles into the sleeves and make them longer (I have trouble drawing hands to!)
That is all now! 100 words now, I'll stop now!
I really like how you drew the hair! It's just so flowy~
The lines are dark, but the lineart should stay the same amount of darkness for the entire body though...
and if you don't feel like drawing hands or are lazy (like me) just make the sleeves longer, do a chibi or put them behind her back? Or you can practise ;D
I also can't give you too much for originality since I've seen that bow on characters for a while
and add some shading.
okay 100 words I'm out xD
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