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.:contest:. SakuraMelodiis by BeriBeri-Chuu .:contest:. SakuraMelodiis by BeriBeri-Chuu
This is a contest entry for :iconsakuramelodii:
Hope you like it
If your wondering , she's sitting on a candy cane which is in a candyfloss tree

Art (c) :iconberiberi-chuu:
Character (c) :iconsakuramelodii:
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Ladies and gentlemen,it's time for CRITIQUE THIS ART!
The rules are simple,100 words,long,in-depth stuff about the artwork.Let's start the game!

So,let me commend you on your art skills.They are beautiful and the art itself is not my problem but some slight technical issues.Like I have stated before,you really should get GIMP or some other photo editing program when you do not have a background.See all those eraser smudges?If you had GIMP,the background would become transparent,so all of those smudges and other blemishes would be gone.Also,I recommend buying an inking pen of some sort to make the drawing look more professional.Inking a drawing makes it stand out and really creates a nice effect.For the drawing itself,it really is beautiful.Just a few minor improvements and you have a lot of talent Beri!


130 word critique,not counting this part that is on the bottom [which I am writing].Have I won?
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Critique by DreamingLittleNeko Nov 24, 2012, 6:51:55 PM
This is an amazing artwork.
I like the concept of it a lot, and her design. The colors are nice too but I think it'd look better with some darker lines, maybe colored pencil/marker mixed media or copics. I also would touch up on anatomy skills even for chibis, she looks a bit chubby to me (unless you intended her to be that way) I'd also touch up the picture in a editing software (photoshop or something) to make the quality better. But other than slight flaws, it looks great! Maybe adding more details would make it look a lot better too
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sawarineko Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's really a very cute picture, you did a great job on it ^^
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Hehe thanks so much
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sawarineko Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem cutie :huggle:
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Iciscle Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This looks awesome! > u <
I like that she's sitting on a candy cane :3
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Hehe thanks so much :3
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Iciscle Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're welcome c:
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SakuraMelodii Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
It's really cute as I said before Beri-chan :3 Good luck! ♥
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Hehe thanks :3 I hope that luck lasts
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Watermelon-Chan Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awh she looks so cute!! ^-^
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BeriBeri-Chuu Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Thanks so much de
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