Ladies and gentlemen,it's time for CRITIQUE THIS ART! The rules are simple,100 words,long,in-depth stuff about the artwork.Let's start the game!
So,let me commend you on your art skills.They are beautiful and the art itself is not my problem but some slight technical issues.Like I have stated before,you really should get GIMP or some other photo editing program when you do not have a background.See all those eraser smudges?If you had GIMP,the background would become transparent,so all of those smudges and other blemishes would be gone.Also,I recommend buying an inking pen of some sort to make the drawing look more professional.Inking a drawing makes it stand out and really creates a nice effect.For the drawing itself,it really is beautiful.Just a few minor improvements and you have a lot of talent Beri!
130 word critique,not counting this part that is on the bottom [which I am writing].Have I won?
This is an amazing artwork. I like the concept of it a lot, and her design. The colors are nice too but I think it'd look better with some darker lines, maybe colored pencil/marker mixed media or copics. I also would touch up on anatomy skills even for chibis, she looks a bit chubby to me (unless you intended her to be that way) I'd also touch up the picture in a editing software (photoshop or something) to make the quality better. But other than slight flaws, it looks great! Maybe adding more details would make it look a lot better too