Okai..... I am not good at critiques but here I go
Right then um..... YOU'VE GOTTEN BETTER THAN ME ALREADY//crai
The hair is really pretty and the face and eyes are proportioned perfectly
You may need to make the eyebrows a bit lower and longer
One shoulder is a bit too long even for the pose
The top is really pretty and you made the arms perfect
The thighs are maybe a bit fat??
And um...IT'S AMAZING
And the bunny ears are super cute
Mocha .... DONT GET ANY BETTER!!! STOP!! Lol
It's really good drawing overall tho :3 I love it
If you ask me, I think mocha was trying to draw the short shoulder the way you would see it in an angle. For example, if you look at someone near the side, one eye would be bigger than the other. Same goes here. The eyebrows does not need to be moved down because I can see how she's trying to draw it. Eyebrows down would mean regular eyebrows but mocha is trying to make the eyebrows raised. The thing she does need improvement on is the left arm. I know that if you look at the arms from a certain angle, the fingers will not show but at least the tip of it has to show. Lastly, I think the waist is perfect. I could see how you might say its fat but waists are suppose to be..fat. LOL. Anyways
Although I do agree about the shoulder part. . . I disagree with the thighs. She's shaped perfectly. Other than the shoulder I couldn't really find a thing wrong with it.
There is always room for improvement but I can't tell saywhat to improve on hehe, it's just a wonderful piece.